paragraph writing-my summer holidays

My holidays started on 8th 04 2009 .The first day i went to Goa.It was a wonderful place.mostly at the beach.Over there we went to a hotel named amazon[5 star one]it was great over there.All i could do is only watch t.v,as there was nothing else over there.or even laptop.I was so bored over there inside the hotel[not outside].the next day we went to a amusement park,it was the 2nd time i ever had so so so so much.Over there we played games.the won in all of them.After few days we went to a forum mall.It was great over there.I played many video games.It was the 3rd time I had so so so so much fun.then the last day we went to a park.i did kite flying over there.It was even greater that was the 4th time i had so so so so much fun.then at night i played at the laptop and then i fell asleep.

Me at 11 years old

This is me but i am not as serious as i look. So don't get scared of me.I am kind from my heart